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Mind Moats.

I cried an ocean to tide my mind over until the shoreline would cease to exist. My eyes brewed the perfect storm, salty on my lips. Lips like mechanical gears on a balance beam, provided with acrobats and rusted limbs. My head is a sailboat, my neck a rope imprisoning me to the dock. Meek minds filled with a mission, hateful hearts with their power trip pulses that seek to control. Hardships are only boats too dense for gravity to propel.

I’ve always dreamed of shaking hands with the horizon. I see the colors change in the sky, bidding me goodnight and welcoming me to each new day as my eyes lift their sails to toast to possibility.

Chance is only a chant, only a reverberating message that is corked inside a bottle. So much desperation filling such a hollow space trapped within transparency. Such heavy words for a vehicle that is thrashed so carelessly amongst relentless waves. I am washed ashore, my ship succumbing to stagnancy, seasick with stillness. It’s a wonder sandbags keep my mind at shore whilst the pebbles beneath my feet offer no resistance.

One day I will bathe in the horizon.


Posted on 08/20/2009 1:00 AM Visits: 116
Hail And Farewell: 08/20/2009 9:18 AM
I absolutely love it! You are an amazing writer! ♥ I always enjoy your freewrites XD
alreadyxdead: 08/20/2009 3:31 PM
amazing as usual♥
Meagan: 08/29/2009 7:58 PM
I loved reading this it is very lovely. but sad :( I hope youre doing better hun.

x
chandralynn: 09/02/2009 12:06 PM
This is very beautiful.
amodollface: 09/30/2009 5:56 PM
beautiful metaphors.
"Ive always dreamed of shaking hands with the horizon."
that lines gorgeous.
shayna marie: 10/01/2009 3:14 PM
i get lost in your writing, in a good way
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